summer revision smackdown: update

I got off to a slow start in spite of my ambition, but am gaining momentum now that the Summer Revision Smackdown is almost over!

I have revised half my graphic novel so far, taken out one character, changed the housekeeper to a wife (the feminist in me wishes it weren't true) and built some comic obsession into one of the character's voices.

It's going better now that I decided only to write, and to tackle the rest of the illustration sample until the writing part is finished.

Thanks again Jolie and Holly for organizing this event. I'm with Sara Easterly; are we on for next month? Summer Revision Smackdown is a hit. Ow!